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I hope this loads correctly. I didn't want to make a preloader bar,or clock, as it would have been in this case.

The entire thing is less than a minute long after several weeks of work. How's that for ego crushing?

If there are any errors I DON'T CARE AT THIS POINT DEAL WITH IT. OTL

Don't read the rest of my comments here until you've watched it through at least once, cause I want some feedback on if you noticed things or not:
OK, here goes.

1: Was the conversation superimposed over the spaceship and guard's arrival confusing at all? Were you able to keep track of the conversation as well as what was happening outside the hive at the same time?
B: When Guard/Dreden are talking, did you notice I shaded the guard, but not Dreden? (And how much did that shading actually add to the character? Can I get away with NOT shading?) ((Also just as a artist error, did you notice that the guards armband had a REAL hard time staying consistant? xD OTL))
Third: Were the faces too repetitive at all? Should I make more expressions for conversations?
IV: Do you understand what happened with Dreden and his pocket watch? Any suggestions on how I can represent time traveling in reverse or fully stopping for subsequent rounds?
(Time slowing/stopping/backwardsing is a huge part of Dreden's character, if it's not clear here, I need to make sure that I find a way to clearly indicate what is going on.)
Five: Should I cut down on conversation, or add more, or make it clearer in any way?
_....: That's all, I love you muchly!





Dreden from me, iS/Tanifa from deadly (check her out [link]), Guard from Linda (check her out: [link]), plot from Marki and Muu ([link]) trolls from Hussie, walking feet animation directly ripped from Terezi's animation and recolored grey (Wela, you stupid thief, can't you draw feet on your own?!? No, no I can not.)
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Imaginary-Mirror Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Filmographer
MAN--- THIS IS JUST BADASS AWESOME >8D
( Call me crazy but as I was advancing through the story, I was laughing along each scene, which is stupidly crazy of me :stupidme: )
( But to be honest, the humor is pretty good :lol: )
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Wela-Inomae Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
homg thank you so muchhhh C: I'm glad someone else has my sense of humor then!
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xlilCarol Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist
Nah don't worry, I also laughed alot /especially when Dreden gives that evilish smirk OHMYGOD/
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0SkyKat0 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Filmographer
I had absolutely no trouble reading your thingie, and I LOVED ALL OF THIS.
Like really.
Hell fucking yes.
I really liked how it explained how the hell did Dreden know about the ship in Tanifa's audition.
And like your troll completely confused the guard.
Good luck in the tournament!!
=D
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Wela-Inomae Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, thanks so much! And good luck to you too!
Yeah, Dreden is a total cheat, using timetravel to know what's coming in advance xDD
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0SkyKat0 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Filmographer
oh this silly cheater!!!
always being so silly with his timey wimey stuff!!
:3
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Akatsukicerberus Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I followed it completely and had no trouble with it. I'm not entirely one for noticing things, so I'm afraid I didn't notice the Guard was shaded and not Dreden.
I really, REALLY enjoyed it when he turned back time though xD I was out of sorts earlier and now I find myself giggling a bit (manly giggling, of course) xDD
On the faces, maybe one or two more expressions, but I don't think it's really that necessary as it worked perfectly.

I just.

Really fucking loved it.
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Wela-Inomae Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh good. I'm glad you didn't notice, I only noticed I forgot to shade him like, halfway through animating it.

AND ALSO MANLY GIGGLING IS THE ONLY TYPE OF GIGGLING PERMITTED HERE SO YOU'RE GOOD.
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Akatsukicerberus Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THEN ALL IS GOOD.
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The-Explosive-One Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I followed everything~ But my troll is pretty much fucked if he goes up against Dreden.
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